Web users prefer writing that is concise, easy to scan, and objective in style. Avoid overly hyped promotional writing, or “marketese.” Great web pages give users the info they need quickly, easily and most often includes a call to action if appropriate (apply now, etc.)
Avoid internal words/language that may not be known outside the college ("Educationese").
Don’t use LB. Spell out the name of the college or use LBCC.
What web users do:
- Skim, scan, & select
- Browse - quick glances, occasional very brief stops
- Read a little at a time, mostly in short bursts
- Be concise (simple words, short phrases)
- Make text easily scannable (call attention to key information)
- Don’t put text in ALL CAPS (this actually slows down reading)
- Left-align text (centering text is harder to read)
- Be consistent: Terminology, tone & style should be the same throughout
- Pod teasers: No more than three lines of text owhen viewed on a computer monitor
- Carousel teaser: Prefer single line of text, never more than two
Layer the details:
- Put brief, most important info at top, or on higher level
- Link to details on a deeper level
Less is more! Include only what users want and need:
- With each sentence, ask: Do users want or need that?
- Then ask: Do they REALLY want or need that?
- Cut! Cut! Cut! Find the essence.
Chunking the content:
- Keep sentences to one or two points
- Don't write prose
- Keep paragraphs short - a one-sentence paragraph is OK
- Use lists (limit to 7 items)
- Use fragments and phrases
Text Writing Suggestions:
- Call attention with useful headings
- Use active voice (who does what to whom)
- Set the context for users: start with what they know or what applies, then give new information
- Use lists (numbered lists for instructions)
- Give instructions with imperatives (i.e., click on Financial Aid)
- Use parallelisms (If you are admitted, do this. If you are not, do this.)
- Use words users know (simpler words – avoid internal college language)
- Try fragments (Smaller classes! More bang for your buck!)
- Make links descriptive (i.e., Search our scholarships.)
Headline in form of a question are good for:
- user guides ("how do I ...?")
Do users ever read whole passages on the web? Yes, but only when:
- They are highly motivated to get information
- The goal is to get extended information, like a report
If text is too long, they are likely to print it out to read it because:
- It is easier to read from paper than from the screen
- We see much less at a time on the screen than on paper
Don’t do this:
P-cards are not transferable and they are issued to individuals, not to organizations. P-card holders may borrow materials for a maximum of FOUR WEEKS, with no renewals. Interlibrary loan services are not available to P-card holders.
Instead, do this:
- are not transferable
- are issued to individuals, not to organizations
- allow borrowing of materials for a maximum of 4 weeks, with no renewals
- do not include access to Interlibrary loan services
Think journalism (not academic writing):
- Who, what, where, when, why and how
- Start with the conclusion, then give the details
- Write relevant content: Web readers want information, not fluff or irrelevance.
- Put conclusions at the beginning: Think of an inverted pyramid when you write. Get to the point in the first paragraph, and then expand upon it.
- Write only one idea per paragraph: Web pages need to be concise and to-the-point. People don't read Web pages, they scan them, and so having short, meaty paragraphs is better than long rambling ones.
- Use action words: Tell your readers what to do. Avoid the passive voice.
- Limit list items to 7 words: Studies have shown that people can only reliably remember 7-10 things at a time.
- Write short sentences: Sentences should be as concise as you can make them. Use only the words you need to get the essential information across.
- Include internal sub-headings: Sub-headings make the text more scanable. Readers will move to the section of the document most useful for them, and internal cues make it easier for them to do this.
- Make your links part of the copy: Links are another way Web readers scan pages. They stand out from normal text, and provide more cues as to what the page is about.
- Proofread your work: Typos and spelling errors will send people away from your pages. Make sure you proofread everything you post to the Web. Have someone else proof as well.
- Clarity: No matter how clear your words seem to you, never assume they're clear to your readers. Talk to your readers, not at them. Never sacrifice clarity for brevity.